Wednesday, October 3, 2007

ASSIGNMEMT # 4

The short story " where are you going? where have you been" was a really good story all though some parts really confused me while reading. I think Arnold was a really sick creepy man who comes off as a rapist even though we have no idea what he did connie. This story is a story that has you questioning at the end, and sometimes that really bugs me because i want to know what happened. if Connie's feelings grew more for Arnold or was he really this sick man he came off to be. If i was Connie i would be so scared and suspicous about a man that randomly pulls up in my drive way at my home while im alone.

what makes a good short story

1) a short story really has to grab your attention right away
2) the plot has to be very interesting and keep my attention throughout the story
3) i like something i can relate to
4) all short stories to do with love, happiness, comedy, suspense, true stories are good things to write stories about
5) i think within a short story you need to make it a good length not too long but long enough to get your point across
6) personal reflect stories
7) stories you can get something out of
8) learn from
9) stories you can describe your personal views to
10) conflicts

3 comments:

hamdi said...

hi i like the theme u used.luv u girl

hamdi said...

hi i like the theme u used.luv u girl

hamdi said...

on assignment 5 i liked the way u used dialogue as an opener.